Yesterday was our rough cut deadline. Before we left the classroom, Tony watched our rough cut and gave us some feedbacks.
The good point was that he said the shots had a professional feel to it. The colours worked well together. However, he did say that the shots of her dancing around on the beach was too "random" and looked more like a home movie rather than a music video. In addition, we do not have enough close-ups in there.
Finally, Tony said that there was too many shots of birds (although we have only two) and that we should have different cut aways.
These feedbacks were very useful and are taken into consideration for our final edit.
