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Hello group 1
Konrad and Danielle - I've looked through your drafts (Natalie and Max....where are your drafts?).
Question one needs to be broadened out a little - look back at your analyses of camerawork and editing of music videos (Vernalis and Goodwin) and then examine how your video borrows from existing videos.  Remember the rules of discontinuous editing, difference in use of narrative, etc etc.

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Hello group 1!
It's been a while since your last posting - nearly 10 days. Don't forget that you should be blogging all the time as we don't want any unexplained gaps in your blog.

Keep up the excellent work.

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I LOVE the photos!  They look amazing - and I particularly like the way that you've used photobucket too.  It looks like the filming session went really well - am looking forward to seeing all your footage on Monday.

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Hello group 1
The blog is looking great - well done.  There are a couple of posts missing (Konrad, Max......) but on the whole it's looking really good.  Some great use of ICT too - I really like the gif files.

One thing to note:  if you put up your copyright letters on the blog make sure that you either remove your address or cover it up with something - it's not good to publicise your home address on an open blog!

Keep up the good work.